worldoflove
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The loss of my individuality,
Would be a consequential tragedy.
First to go, mirth sweet mirth;
A blessing I've had since my very birth.
My comprehension of the universe, i fear,
Turns mute so my conscience can't hear.
The fires of passion, brightly burning are they,
Suffocate and my mind becomes soft clay.
Next to depart; glorious sanity,
I scream as i fall into dark nihility.
The darkness presses in, imprisoning my life,
I beg for forgiveness as i pick up the knife.
I see a light, a promise of freedom;
An epic thrust to begin my journey to the Great Kingdom
Its kind of dark but its how I truly feel about who I am. I write alot of poetry so expect to hear from me again soon and I would love to hear from all of you. Heres one for the road
The love I Miss
My life is empty, dark and cold,
Without having you right here to hold.
My laugh is empty, my smile a mask,
Only you can give me emotion, not an easy task.
When you are here again, in my arms to stay,
I will never again have such an amazing day.
But this is just a dream, although full of bliss,
Until you return, all I can do is crave the love I miss.
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angel23231
angel23231
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April 7, 2012
Posts: 8
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`Wow, very deep. I think both are beautiful poems. I love writing poetry, too; it's a great way to release all of your emotions. I really love the line, "My laugh is empty, my smile a mask." I can relate in many ways Have a good day.
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